My second of 52 Villains and this is a 2 part story and this first part is an origin story.
This is my first 2 part story on Animatic Press but I like the idea of the origin set up for this because I think the back story was important to the overall joke of the villain. There are not as many jokes or absurd behavior in this comic as my others and writing style is different too in this one. Not sure what to say about this except that it is important to try and see what works and what doesn’t sometimes.
The “52 Villains” series is fun but it is challenging in ways I never thought it would be but hopefully I will come out the other side of this a better writer and more seasoned at creating characters that are entertaining and fun.
So tune in next week for part 2 (I always wanted to say that).
This could have been a perfect animated show/marketing ploy for P&G to push Mr Clean on kids like they did detergent using soap operas. Kids would be bugging their parents only to get mr clean to wipe out the dirt in the house.
That is one crazy chick! And everyone knows women know how to serve the best revenge.
I never knew Mr. Clean had a a wife on the darkside!
(A couple of typos– who’s instead of whose, and wears instead of wares.)
Thanks. Man I stink at grammer.
Great, Frank! Especially love that final panel. The “fresh scent of revenge” – hilarious! Can’t wait to see the rest of this “dirty” little tale…
Thanks. Now I just need to find more time to tell her other stories.
I love evil Mrs. Clean’s character design. She really looks like something Mr. Clean would fight off to get a kitchen floor clean.
Hehe, very silly, very deranged! Lots of fun, Frank!
Thank you. The deranged part just sort of slipped in there. I guess it was meant to be.
Ha Ha Good one Frank. Nice to see a new type of superhero villain. You could be onto a big Hollywood money spinner here. Maybe she could go to Gotham City in the next Batman movie & mess up the Bat cave. It’s kinda sad to see how some villains sink to their murky depths of crime from a once exuberant life.
Yes it is sad. It only she used her energy for good instead of evil.
This is hilarious! I can’t wait to see what happens next. It’s true though, I’ve noticed that Mr. Clean in his commercials only shows up AFTER the cleaning is done.
That’d make me angry too =<
I never even knew Mr. Clean was married. By the way, love that white on black in panel four. Awesome work as always.
Always enjoying your drawing and artistic typography. “REVENGE”? now I MUST see what happens after this